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ndugan1	Post subject: Gotta love those AP suggested heds Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 5:14 pm
Joined: Thu Jul 15, 2004 12:01 am Posts: 968 Location: Champaign, Ill.	The hed that came with an AP story about fighting in Afghanistan:<p>Three American, two Afghan soldiers killed in clash with militiamen<p>Quotes from the subsequent story:<p>Three U.S. and two Afghan soldiers were wounded Thursday when a regional militia attacked their convoy in a remote province wracked by factional tension, the American military said<p>All five wounded were listed as stable, including one American who was seriously injured, Peat said.<p>***They must be talking about three OTHER American and two OTHER Afghan soldiers who died in that very same fight with militiamen.***
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redpenman	Post subject: Re: Gotta love those AP suggested heds Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:53 pm
Joined: Fri Jul 23, 2004 12:01 am Posts: 65	Same thing happened last weekend. I can't remember the subject, but they listed someone as dead in the suggested hed that was wounded. AP's craving DEATH.
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