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Ray Coniglio
 Post subject: Simply murder
PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2004 1:02 pm 
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I’d usually blame breaking news and a looming deadline for this kind of thing, but some poor scribe spent at least a day on this story.
Here’s the lede (and part of the second graf) of a story published today about a murder -- the first one in the community since 1994:<p>“It’s the kind of 10-year anniversary no one wanted.
“Gunshots rattled an apartment complex early Saturday morning ...”<p>(The story goes on to describe the shooting, which left a man dead in the street. A neighbor, “Mrs. Smith,” was awakened by the sound of gunfire but didn’t see anything when she looked out the window.)<p>“Soon after, police arrived, changing what Smith said is normally a quite, safe neighborhood into a murder scene.”<p>I guess the police won’t have to look far for suspects. And the typo is a nice touch.
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JayByrd
 Post subject: Re: Simply murder
PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2004 1:28 pm 
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If you only get one homicide a decade, i can see how everyone -- the reporter, the cops, the witnesses -- would be out of practice...
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Powderhorn
 Post subject: Re: Simply murder
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 1:06 am 
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<blockquote><font size="1" face="TImes, TimesNR, serif">quote:</font><hr>Originally posted by Ray Coniglio:
I“It’s the kind of 10-year anniversary no one wanted.”
<hr></blockquote><p>10-year anniversary? More like "it's the kind of writing no one wanted to see."
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paulwiggins
 Post subject: Re: Simply murder
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 2:56 am 
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<blockquote><font size="1" face="TImes, TimesNR, serif">quote:</font><hr>Originally posted by JayByrd:
If you only get one homicide a decade, i can see how everyone -- the reporter, the cops, the witnesses -- would be out of practice...
JByrd<hr></blockquote>
This just in on the wires from another place<p>
Norfolk Island's Land and Environment Minister, Ivens Buffett, was found dead in the island's administration building this morning - the island's secon248|rder in 150 years
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