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 Post subject: How many questions is too many?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 5:35 pm 
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Because this story opens up with a whole passel of em.


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 Post subject: Re: How many questions is too many?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 7:25 pm 
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From the article:<p>Being invaded by a colony of secretive Arizona and Utah men with two, three or more wives apiece wearing ankle-length, gingham pioneer dresses while working the fields under a scorching western Texas sun?<p>***Beg y'all's pardon? Is this a polygamist cult or a cross-dressing cult?


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 Post subject: Re: How many questions is too many?
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 1:16 pm 
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ELDORADO, Texas - Folks around here couldn't be more dumbfounded if a flying saucer buzzed the county courthouse and spooked all the sheep this side of Abilene.<p>Eight grafs before we know what the story's about. I'd say the readers are the dumbfounded ones.


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 Post subject: Re: How many questions is too many?
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:15 pm 
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I daresay the reaction of the locals is not accurately described when it is referred to as "dumbfounded."


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