A good example of the kind of hed that makes copy editors testy. Unless it's a controlled demolition, a bridge collapse usually stuns someone. Try to tell the news, not characterize it.
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| Author: | J Kaufman [ Fri May 24, 2013 10:43 am ] |
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A good example of the kind of hed that makes copy editors testy. Unless it's a controlled demolition, a bridge collapse usually stuns someone. Try to tell the news, not characterize it. Attachment: Capture.JPG [ 84.53 KiB | Viewed 356 times ] |
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