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 Post subject: Reads well, but it's wrong
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:17 am 
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In Cannibal Case, Officer’s Wife Testifies About a Chilling Discovery


*** This is not a "cannibal case." No one is alleging that Valle ate anybody. It's work, but let's write another headline. ***


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 Post subject: Re: Reads well, but it's wrong
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 12:40 pm 
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Here's another headline:

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 Post subject: Re: Reads well, but it's wrong
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 2:06 pm 
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And the Post's lede:
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He thought his wife was a real dish.

The story also refers to the alleged victim as a "pretty brunette."


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 Post subject: Re: Reads well, but it's wrong
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 2:24 pm 
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You people know that the Post and the Daily News don't count here.


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