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 Post subject: How it's supposed to work
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2004 7:03 pm 
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THE BUDGET NOTE
HIGH-WASP-STYLE (Undated) … Does anybody have better bad taste than members of America's
upper class, a group Paul Fussell once categorized as ``the top out-of-sights?'' The visual
cliches of the type are the stuff of legend (and plays by A.R. Gurney.) Their houses are
furnished with gravy-colored ancestor portraits, threadbare Tabriz rugs from Aunt Millicent,
China export porcelain held together with Crazy Glue and upholstered furniture whose errant
springs ambush the unwary sitter LIKE A RECTAL THERMOMETER.<p>
THE ACTUAL COPY:<p> Does anybody have better bad taste than members of America's upper class, a group Paul
Fussell once categorized as ``the top out-of-sights?'' The visual cliches of the type are the
stuff of legend (and plays by A.R. Gurney). Their houses are furnished with gravy-colored
ancestor portraits, threadbare Tabriz rugs from Aunt Millicent, China export porcelain held
together with Krazy Glue and upholstered furniture whose errant springs ambush the unwary
sitter LIKE PINCERS.


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 Post subject: Re: How it's supposed to work
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2004 10:31 pm 
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WASPs are invaluable. Bumf. Last ethnic group we can dump on, without grave political consequences.


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 Post subject: Re: How it's supposed to work
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2004 10:44 pm 
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Also, besides the thermometer thing, I like the fact that the desk caught Crazy/Krazy Glue.


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