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Gatekeeper	Post subject: Madrid Body Count ... Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2004 2:15 pm
Joined: Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:01 am Posts: 309 Location: Upper Midwest	... OK, so maybe I'm dense, but why has the body count dropped from 202 dead to 190 dead in the stories I've seen of late? Duplicated names?<p>Gatekeeper<p>-30-
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wordygurdy	Post subject: Re: Madrid Body Count ... Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2004 2:20 pm
Joined: Sat Nov 01, 2003 1:01 am Posts: 741 Location: The Empire State	This is gruesome, but from the stories I've read, recovery authorities realized they had misidentified body parts as having come from more than one person. That's how awful the bombs' effect was.
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Gatekeeper	Post subject: Re: Madrid Body Count ... Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2004 3:11 pm
Joined: Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:01 am Posts: 309 Location: Upper Midwest	Yes, it's gruesome. Mystery solved for me ... now if only I can get my colleagues to keep those explainer grafs in instead of cutting them for space. Thanks!<p>Gatekeeper<p>-30-
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jjmoney62	Post subject: Re: Madrid Body Count ... Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2004 7:02 pm
Joined: Mon Apr 08, 2002 12:01 am Posts: 3135 Location: Albuquerque, N.M. USA	<blockquote><font size="1" face="TImes, TimesNR, serif">quote:</font><hr>Originally posted by wordygurdy: This is gruesome, but from the stories I've read, recovery authorities realized they had misidentified body parts as having come from more than one person. That's how awful the bombs' effect was.<hr></blockquote><p>Could we use "impact" instead of "effect" in this case?
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Matthew Grieco	Post subject: Re: Madrid Body Count ... Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2004 4:03 pm
Joined: Mon Mar 10, 2003 1:01 am Posts: 2266 Location: New Jersey	Grammatically, yes. Stylistically, I would stick with "effect" because "impact" would make it sound as though the bombs collided with something before detonating.
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