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 Post subject: Adjectives
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 12:19 am 
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Which of the following unattributed adjectives would leave in a story?<p>anxious White House
unusually strong
daylong attack
incendiary re-election campaign
largely out of sight
even more blunt
authoritative insider account
credible attack
sharply critical<p>
incendiary new book
brusque style
brash manner<p>aggressive personal attack
furious debate
incendiary allegations
angry White House response
daylong assault
secretive, combative terrorism expert<p>blistering attack<p>ferocious assault
particularly sensitive
unusually stern
directly challenged
prevailing view
conspicuously silent<p>stepped-up White House counterattack<p>full-scale assault
aggressive rebuttal
unusual number
thinly-veiled shot
scathing criticism


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 Post subject: Re: Adjectives
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 1:26 am 
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Please, Brian....don't make me work so hard. I come here to have "fun."


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 Post subject: Re: Adjectives
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 12:10 pm 
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I think most of them would depend on the context. If the story backed them up, they would fly.
"Prolonged efforts to open the safe made the old crowbar even more blunt than it had been at the beginning." Where's the problem?
Anxious White House problematical. It's hard to psychoanalyze others, still harder to psychoanalyze buildings.


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