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 Post subject: Too much information
PostPosted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 5:36 pm 
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Jim Scheider, a fireman who was working part time in Etna on his day off, was standing in line at the Dairy Queen. Someone ordered a strawberry shake. Someone else ordered burgers to go. "Originally," Scheider says of the shootings, "I thought it was all an accident. Then you thought it was some nut case just shooting at cars. But then, he didn't let it go." (Washington Post)<p>*Someone else stopped reading.*


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 Post subject: Re: Too much information
PostPosted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 8:56 pm 
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:::angrily chews on stale cigar:::<p>"For the love of Christ, Kent, what did Scheider order?!?"


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 Post subject: Re: Too much information
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... Fear was descending like daylight across the flat landscape, through the naked tree branches, beneath the bright blue sky.<p>Great Caesar's ghost!<p>[ March 08, 2004: Message edited by: SeaRaven ]</p>


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 Post subject: Re: Too much information
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..... A law enforcement figure rises into a mesmerizing and bewitching limelight. <p>*I need a beer. This stuff is worse than undergraduate creative writing classes and I didn't think that was possible*<p>[ March 11, 2004: Message edited by: Paul Wiggins ]</p>


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