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 Post subject: The rich middle-age white centrist Godfathers of Soul
PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 7:50 am 
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Whoever Is Chosen, Democrats Spoil for a Fight
By ROBIN TONER
The struggle for the Democratic presidential nomination is
not just about personalities and programs, but also about
the direction -- maybe even the soul -- of the party.<p>**Maybe even not.**


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 Post subject: Re: The rich middle-age white centrist Godfathers of Soul
PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 3:10 pm 
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I don't wish to commit the sin of being anti-testy, but I don't think this lede is off-base. It's overdone as of late, but as a concerned Democrat myself I don't think it is inappropriate to use the word "soul" here. I think it's a pretty good description of what's going on. Some elections are far more important than others, and I think this is one of the pivotal ones.


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 Post subject: Re: The rich middle-age white centrist Godfathers of Soul
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If that lede doesn't sound a bit silly to you now, it will as time passes.<p>[ January 30, 2004: Message edited by: jjmoney62 ]</p>


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 Post subject: Re: The rich middle-age white centrist Godfathers of Soul
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<blockquote><font size="1" face="TImes, TimesNR, serif">quote:</font><hr>Originally posted by jjmoney62:
If that lede doesn't sound a bit silly to you now, it will as time passes.<p>[ January 30, 2004: Message edited by: jjmoney62 ]<hr></blockquote><p>Perhaps. I'll tell you in a year or two.


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 Post subject: Re: The rich middle-age white centrist Godfathers of Soul
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<blockquote><font size="1" face="TImes, TimesNR, serif">quote:</font><hr>Originally posted by jjmoney62:
**Maybe even not.**<hr></blockquote>Aside from the fact that "maybe" shouldn't be in a news story, much less the lede, I find this overly dramatic and teevee-newsish. (I can hear Brokaw saying it.)<p>Still, it'd probably get me to read it, no matter which side I were on -- even if only to learn Ms. Toner's definition of "the soul of the party." <p>But having seen both Richard Nixon and Al Gore attempt to dance, I can attest that neither party has soul.


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