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 Post subject: Racquel Welch, in a tiny submarine, probing your GI trac
PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2003 8:07 pm 
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By TODD ACKERMAN
c.2003 Houston Chronicle
HOUSTON … Employing technology that recalls the sci-fi film
``Fantastic Voyage,'' local researchers have discovered that a
popular painkiller causes more significant damage to the
gastrointestinal tract than previously thought.


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 Post subject: Re: Racquel Welch, in a tiny submarine, probing your GI trac
PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2003 10:14 pm 
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<blockquote><font size="1" face="TImes, TimesNR, serif">quote:</font><hr>Originally posted by Bumfketeer:
By TODD ACKERMAN
c.2003 Houston Chronicle
HOUSTON … Employing technology that recalls the sci-fi film
``Fantastic Voyage,'' local researchers have discovered that a
popular painkiller causes more significant damage to the
gastrointestinal tract than previously thought.
<hr></blockquote><p>Beyond being blind the stupidity of using a strained popular culture reference to report on a scientific finding, did anyone stop to consider that it's a small and rapidly shrinking portion of the readership that knows about or remembers "Fantastic Voyage"? It's hardly a classic, after all.


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 Post subject: Re: Racquel Welch, in a tiny submarine, probing your GI trac
PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2003 11:24 pm 
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Agreed, Phil...that's the SECOND reason this lede is awful.


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