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PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2013 7:58 am 
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You can try to play the hed straight, and it still doesn't sound right. Bonus service journalism: Guns work much better than pills. [Mind that "just,"[*] unless you're disappointed.]

To Reduce Suicide Rates, New Focus Turns to Guns
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Guns are particularly lethal. Suicidal acts with guns are fatal in 85 percent of cases, while those with pills are fatal in just 2 percent of cases, according to the Harvard Injury Control Research Center.
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[*] Similarly, in j-school, we were taught to avoid only, as in The fully loaded bus plunged off the ravine, but only two people were killed.


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